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Re: Melancholy
Hi. In my opinion, to be honest about 90% of Saint's pickings were that necessary. I read it and didn't think that much was kinda cliche. There was probbably a ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: The Salvation of Earth
I think it was great. The ideas you came up with like the weather and the Smart Missiles. The very start dragged on a bit, i think you could of ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Under The Street- Chapter One
I think it was great, only a bit confusing at what Adias was at the start. There was no real explanation or opening to describe who everyone was. Some bits ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: Spirits of Life- Chapter 1
Hi (sorry if some of the code and stuff is wrong but i've only just started posting), I read your prologue and I must say this is a definate improvement. ...
Jan 28, 2008